Tuesday, November 5, 2013

The Times I spent on the Ranch

I once spent a lot of time on my grandpas ranch
It was a great place to be

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  1. This doesn't follow assignment directions.The first line should concentrate on one portion of the whole thing you've identified in your title.
    Notice that the first line is 12 syllables (5 + 7 or akin to the first two lines of a haiku).The second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor.Notice that the second line is 7 syllables long.

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  2. Being at grandpas is a great place to be at:)

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